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What I would say to you,
If your ears would listen.
As the tears on my face,
Rain down and glisten.


What I would say to you,
Less consumed by hate.
How I never betrayed you;
Yet the words come too late.

Our love was destined,
To survive but a time.
The memory of your smile,
Lingers still in my mind.

At our last caress,
Shadowed by the coming night .
I would hold you in darkness,
Until the morning light.

But my arms remain empty,
As they reach out for you.
My heart torn asunder,
Weeping as the morning dew.

The darkness crept upon us
And our love could not survive.
I continue on alone
Yet inside I'm not alive.
:iconblonde-jedi:
Well, in my mind, Padme was too strong of a woman to die like she did in the movie. So, I imagine her living on..(beautiful but sad somehow, as Leia described her) and these are the images that came to my mind, in the form of a poem.

(Again, not my sand box, I just play there!)
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:iconlikelytodisaster:
So wonderful! Congrats! :D
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:iconforcechild:
~ForceChild Dec 10, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
This sent chills down my spine! well done!
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:iconblonde-jedi:
Awwwwwwwww, I'm SO glad you enjoyed it!
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~ForceChild Dec 12, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
I did! :hug:
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:iconjinx-lin:
This is beautiful and haunting--very nicely done! :)
And I do like the idea of Padmé living on, since she was sort of cast off as a poor sad woman by the end...
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:iconblonde-jedi:
Thanks :heart:

Yeah I think she's too strong of a character to just die like that....
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:icontakianna:
Hauntingly sad.
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:iconblonde-jedi:
This senator needs a hug, Captain ;-)
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